PandaRazen's War [Thx for the help :D nearly done]

[PandaRazen]

War
The Beast Summoner
Model:
War is a half-orc and a half-ogre creature. He is one of the peacemakers of the war between orcs and ogres. After he solved the problem he traveled and met some animals. He then befriended them and somehow linked them to himself. War is able to summon his animal friends,  and some with their fellow friends. The animals he met are Haratha the Wolf, Misha the Bear, Spirit the Hawk, some Quilbeasts and Leokk the Wyvern. Then he was stranded in a mysterious island where he found some creatures who are at war and volunteered himself to help in their fight.
NOTE: This is a hard builder because he is only a supporter
Stats

HP:300
MP:150
Movement Speed: 370
Damage: 150-150
Type: Pierce
Armor: 1
Type: Fortified

Abilities

Regeneration: Because he is a great warrior. He can regain again the lost blood from his body. Regenerates 5hp per 2 secs. Needs Cure

Wild Axe: War throws his axes to his enemy dealing damage and a lasting effect also adds a slowing effect. Deals 350 damage, 20 lasting damage effect and a 15% slowing effect. Costs 100 mana. 150 sec cooldown. Click(For those who don't know it. It means that you must click the enemy like for example when you will attack the enemy.)

Model:
Icon:Summon Misha

Summons the bear Misha to help him in his fight against the titans.

[Has Roar(20% Attack Increase and 10% AS Increase), Bash(stun for 1 sec 35% chance and War Stomp(1 sec stun and 250 damage 100 mana)]. 100 mana. 100 secs. Summon. Attack 200-200 Pierce. Needs Link Bear


Model:
Icon:Summon Haratha

Summons Haratha to help him in his war against the titans.

[Has shadowmeld, critical strike(50% chance) and bash(stun for 1 sec 50% chance)]. 100 mana. 100 secs. Summon. Attack 150-150 Pierce. Needs Link Wolf

Model:
Icon:Summon Leokk

Summons Leokk to help him(Can fly over trees and etc.). 100 mana. 100 secs. Summon. Attack 100-100 Pierce. Needs Link Wyvern. Has Slow Poison(Needs Enchant Poison),Windwalk and Burst. The fastest of the three

NOTE: All his summons don't have a time limit. That means they will live until they die. They can also harvest except wyvern(Harvesting limit and how much lumber is harvest depends on your upgrade). Misha has 850HP and 300Mana and 2 Heavy armor, Haratha has 600HP and 1 Heavy armor, and Leokk has 400HP and 1 Fortified armor.
Buildings

Model:
Icon: Spirit
A movable shelter. (There is a button called Hold.) MS: 220 Can travel through trees and cliffs but can only stay in areas where buildings can be build.(Can call quilbeasts(harvesters).(Can't call quilbeasts if not in a place where building must be.)

Armor: 1 Type: Heavy, HP: 200

Model:
Icon:
Food Consumption: 25 (each)
Can Harvest up to: 5 Lumber. Can be upgraded to 10 then 15
Lumber Carry Limit: 20. Can be upgraded to 30(on the 2nd upgrade)

Upgrades:

Link Bear: Links with the bear Misha so he can summon it. 750 lumber 20 gold. Needs Link Wolf and Link Wyvern
Link Wolf: Links with the wolf Haratha so he can summon it. 200 lumber
Link Wyvern: Links with the wyvern Leokk so he can summon it. 500 lumber 5 gold.
Enchant Poison: Enchants Leokk's Tail with venom making it poisonous. 500 lumber 1 gold.
Cure: Let War learn Regeneration. Costs 15 gold and 1000 lumber.
Power Up!: Boosts up the power and resistance of War. Adds 20 damage and 200 hp. 20 gold 800 lumber.
Phoenix Fire: Enhances the walls flames making it combustible and explode when it is destroyed. Damage is 250. 1 gold and 650 lumber.
Phoenix Fire: Enhances more the wall's flames making it combustible and explode when it is destroyed. Damage will become 500. 3 gold and 650 lumber. Needs Hell Phoenix Egg

Walls:

Blazing Egg:
Armor: 6
HP: 250
Costs: 50 lumber
Has Phoenix Fire skill.

Hell Phoenix Egg:
Armor: 15
HP: 500
Costs: 1 gold, 500 lumber
Has Phoenix Fire skill.

NOTE: War can ride in Leokk for easy traveling.(Like radioactive's hunter)[/list]

[PoNy]

I don't see what your getting at Carn, I don't see the word naga on this page other then your
Post o.O

[Playerof]

Walls:

 Blazing Egg: Armor 3. HP: Same as other walls. 50 lumbers. Has Phoenix Fire skill.
Hell Phoenix Egg: Armor 5 HP: Same as other 3rd tier walls. 1 gold and 500 lumber. Has Phoenix Fire skill
i think you mean 5armor HP:250
15Armor HP:500

[carnerox]

I mean it's half human not Ogre. :|

I blame me being half sleep.

[Jux.Mage]

HP is overpowered.
Cost to get Misha is overpriced.
Creature Pictures are too big.

[carnerox]

This reminds me of demo without all the upgrades and over costly junk. 

[RuNm]

War
The Beast Summoner

War is a half-orc and a half-ogre creature. He is one of the peacemakers of the war between orcs and ogres. After he solved the problem he traveled and met some animals. He then befriended them and somehow linked them to himself. War is able to summon his animal friends, and some with their fellow friends. The animals he met are Haratha the Wolf, Misha the Bear, Leokk the Hawk, some Quillboars and a Wyvern. Then he was stranded in a mysterious island where he found some creatures who are at war and volunteered himself to help in their fight.
NOTE: This is a hard builder because he is only a supporter.
Stats

HP:300
MP:150
Movement Speed: 370
Damage: 150-150
Type: Pierce
Armor: 1
Type: Fortified

Abilities


Summon Misha
Summons the bear Misha to help him in his fight against the titans.
Misha has: Roar: 20% Attack Increase and 10% AS Increase
Bash: stun for 1 sec 35% chance
War Stomp: 1 sec stun and 250 damage 100 mana
100 mana. 100 secs. Summon. Attack 200-200 Pierce.
Needs Link Bear


Summon Haratha
Summons Haratha to help him in his war against the titans.
Haratha has: Shadowmeld
Critical strike: 50% chance
Bash: stun for 1 sec 50% chance
100 mana. 100 secs. Summon. Attack 150-150 Pierce. Needs Link Wolf


Summon Leokk
Summons the wyvern Leokk to help him in his war against the titans. Can fly over trees and etc.
Leokk has: Slow Poison (Needs Enchant Poison)
100 mana. 100 secs. Summon. Attack 100-100 Pierce. Needs Link Wyvern.

NOTE: All his summons don't have a time limit. That means they will live until they die. They can also harvest except wyvern(Harvesting limit and how much lumber is harvest depends on your upgrade). Misha has 1000HP and 300Mana, Haratha has 750HP, and Leokk has 700HP. (should put them with the info of the othe summons, but I'm too lazy to bother)

Buildings

Spirit
A movable shelter. (There is a button called Hold. If you are to stupid to not know that, learn to read or gtfo.)
MS: 220
Armor: 1
Type: Heavy
HP: 300

Summons quillboars(harvesters) food same as other harvesters. 5 Lumber per Harvesting has a limit of 20 can be upgraded to 10-20, 11-22 (I don't even understand this part)

Upgrades:

Link Bear: Links with the bear Misha so he can summon it. 2000 lumber 20 gold

Link Wolf: Links with the wolf Haratha so he can summon it. 200 lumber

Link Wyvern: Links with the wyvern Leokk so he can summon it. 500 lumber 5 gold.

Enchant Poison: Enchants Leokk's Tail with venom making it poisonous. 500 lumber 1 gold.

Phoenix Fire: Enhances the walls flames making it combustible and explode when it is destroyed. Damage is 100. 1 gold and 650 lumber.

Walls:


Blazing Egg:
Armor: 5
HP: 250
Has Phoenix Fire skill.


Hell Phoenix Egg:
Armor: 10
HP: 500
Costs: 1 gold, 500 lumber
Has Phoenix Fire skill

Everything in red is something I've changed, but to the best of my ability and tolerance, these are just most of the spelling, gammer, and listing errors I can find. So much more is needed but even I'm to lazy to bother pointing it out.

Some advice if I may, look at other completed suggestions and form yours in the same format or template, and be very clear with you tooltips if possible. Gammer and spelling matter a lot. And ffs, don't use lists unless you know how to use them properly, otherwise it just makes everything a huge mess.

[SgtWaffles]

bad idea to just join the site, and then pop up with this builder guy.

definately needs some serious changes, definately needs some seriously serious work.

finish your builder, make him complete, give him a decent number of ups etc, THEN post it for critique.

I dislike the idea of posting a half baked builder idea, (and gigantic pics makes it even worse) then saying what do you think??

go fix it up in microsoft word, get your pics right etc, attempt to balance it, ask some friends on wc3 to check it out, and then whack it on here.

[theorchero]

HP is overpowered.
Cost to get Misha is overpriced.
Creature Pictures are too big.

^--- this x 7.8%

[RuNm]

If you go to the suggestions page, there are a bunch of things that show you what to and what not do, as well as showing how to do what needs to be done.

[PandaRazen]

bad idea to just join the site, and then pop up with this builder guy.

definately needs some serious changes, definately needs some seriously serious work.

finish your builder, make him complete, give him a decent number of ups etc, THEN post it for critique.

I dislike the idea of posting a half baked builder idea, (and gigantic pics makes it even worse) then saying what do you think??

go fix it up in microsoft word, get your pics right etc, attempt to balance it, ask some friends on wc3 to check it out, and then whack it on here.

Sry for big pix....
Just got it from wowwiki.com
I just built it for an hour. And I am sleepy when I made it. Don't wry I'll change it

[PandaRazen]

Thx RuNm =D
For now just that lol I'll make the hawk and quillboar spirit smaller...

[RuNm]

No problem, btw, you should change the pictures to icons and have to model below the icon, sort of liek this:

Model: Leokk

Its just basically a space and scolling saver

[PandaRazen]

No problem, btw, you should change the pictures to icons and have to model below the icon, sort of liek this:

Model: Leokk

Its just basically a space and scolling saver

Can't find a wyvern pic D:

[PandaRazen]

Can't finish it today....
that's it for now...

[Playerof]

lol?
and this builder is odd it has completely OP stuff and complete dogdew stuff, balance it and it may be good and how bout 400HP fort armor