The Naga Queen

Hello, this is Dai-Rukh. This is my first post, so I am really looking forward to hearing how everyone likes it. Anywho, I got this idea out of nowhere, and I wondered what you lot would think of it, but before you say so, I heard from my brother that a Naga builder was suggested before this: I am not, in any way, trying to “bring it back” so please hear me out. The Queen is intended to be a support/hunter race, and her point is to use the builder and the hunter together to bring down titans.

The Naga Queen

Shortly after the destruction of the Naga’s home in the great maelstrom, the Naga High Queen Scheherezade and High Princess Llaizha, the only survivors of the royal family, found their way onto a small, godforsaken island, somewhere in the middle of nowhere. The primitive inhabitants of this island, upon their arrival, begged the two to aid them in the defense of their island against a “Titan”. Apparently, this “Titan” was a being of immense power and could only be defeated if the populace of the island worked together as one. The mother and daughter, after holding a brief conference with each other, agreed to help. These peoples could possibly be useful slaves to help rebuild the Naga Empire, but the Titan would have to be vanquished so that it would not pose a threat to the Queen’s plans…

(Sorry if the story doesn’t tie in too well; I made up or guessed most of it.)

Builder:
The Naga Queen:

Scheherezade the Naga High Queen is one of the two survivors of the maelstrom to reach the island, the other being her daughter, and she had allied herself with the inhabitants out of pure necessity. She is a skilled archer with potent magic but is weak in close combat: defend her well, she is the queen!

Sound Set: Normal Sea Witch
Health: 300 (average)
Health Regeneration: average
Movement Speed: average
Range: Maybe 500-600, like a normal-esque tower
Damage: 125 Piercing
Armour: None (normal)
Attack Speed: Maybe a touch better than average
Mana: 200
Mana Regeneration: Faster (2 per second)
1x1 normal base size
6 inventory slots
Human building style (normal)
Cannot harvest lumber: she is a Queen and is beneath such menial tasks.

The Queen gains levels exactly like the Tauren EXCEPT she does NOT gain experience from poking (I am not trying to “bring back” the Huntress). Her stats could be similar to the Tauren’s except she probably will gain less Strength and more Agility per level-up and maybe a bit more Intelligence. She does, like the Tauren, gain experience from golding. The Queen gains abilities via technologies. Her stats can be created using Hero statistics.

Abilities:

Repair

Golding

Swimming (The Queen, like some hunters and titans, can swim. This ability doesn’t have, or need, an icon)

Weapon Poison

Requires: Couatl Venom
Passive
All normal shots made by the Queen poison the target for 8-10 per second and lowers the foe’s attack speed by 5%. Lasts 6 seconds per instance. Both the poison and attack speed modifier stack.

Glacier Barb

Requires: Glacier Barb
This functions exactly as Frost Arrows; you can autocast it and it takes mana per shot. Enemies hit by Glacier Barbs are slowed attack and movement speed by 20% (unstacking). This effect lasts 8 seconds. Glacier Barbs are not Poisoned by Weapon Poison. Costs 10 mana per shot. No cooldown

Stormcalling

Requires: Stormcalling
Target an area within 600. For 10 seconds, the area is hit by lightning bolts, each dealing maybe 30 damage, and with 2 bolts striking per second, randomized between all in the AoE (Aforementioned AoE has a radius of 150). The Queen has to channel this spell. Costs 180 mana. 60 second cooldown.

Precision Shot

Requires: Deadeye
This is a spell that deals 300 damage to an enemy within 800. This shot also has a 10% chance to do 1200 damage instead. Costs 30 mana and has a 25 second cooldown.

Cyclone

Requires: Tome of the Air
This spell is exactly like the Panda Storm Cyclone except that it lasts 3 seconds, costs 60 mana, and has a 30 second cooldown.

Cloud

Requires: Tome of the Air
This is a channeling spell that creates a cloud in which people can effectively hide. People inside the cloud have their vision reduced to 0, but are invisible to people outside of the cloud (and towers). Cloud is a channeling spell that takes 12 mana/second to maintain (Don’t forget: 2 mana/second recharge rate). Has a 75 second cooldown.

Escape:
Undulate:

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The Queen gains 100% evasion, spell immunity, and bonus speed for 2-3 seconds. 75 cooldown (This is similar to the Satyr’s Blur, but lasts maybe a second or two longer)

Builds:

Barrio

(This is a possibility. I'm still not sure about it. Please give suggestions)
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These underground catacombs house and breed the Larvae used by the Naga to do hard labor jobs.
Trains Larvae
Researches the normal lumber harvesting technologies
Acts as a drop point.
Each Barrio provides 30 food
Normal build time, cost, and hit points.

City Wall

(One or all of these)
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Back in the Naga Royal City, the Queen had these mighty barriers put up to defend her home against attacks and storms. Now, she must use her memories of their plans to construct smaller versions of the towering barricades she once knew
These walls have the same stats as normal ones except that they have +5 armour and cost 25 more wood to make and 50 more to upgrade.

Spire

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In the old days, Naga royalty would climb these mighty spires to watch the stars at night and read the ancient tomes of knowledge. It is here that the Queen and her daughter will learn the ancient Naga arts of combat and magic to help kill the Titan.
Has the same stats as a normal research center, costs 300 lumber.
Sells Turtle scales

Researches:

Haste Training as normal

Couatl Venom

Using the venom of the bizarre “flying serpent” the Queen can brew and effective weapon poison to paralyze the foe’s nervous system.
This gives the queen the Weapon Poison ability, giving her a passive, stacking poison that deals a small amount of damage per second and slows the enemy’s attack speed.
5 Gold, 800 Lumber, 80 seconds

Sharpshooting

By training with her bow outside of combat, the Queen becomes more skilled at hitting her foe where it hurts most
Increases the Queen’s damage by 25 per upgrade. 3 tiers.
Tier 1: 1200 lumber; Tier 2: 5 Gold, 1200 Lumber, Merchant; Tier 3: 5 Gold, 1800 Lumber, ARC. Not sure about the time

Bow Upgrades

The art of Bowmaking is one taken very seriously by the Queen and is a task she will trust to no one but herself. Each bow, obviously, is better made and can shoot farther.
Increases range by 50 per ugrade. 3 tiers.
Tier 1 (Oaken Bow): 1500 Lumber; Tier 2 (Elm Bow): 2400 Lumber, Merchant; Tier 3 (Yew Bow), 5 Gold, 3200 Lumber, ARC. Not sure about the time.

Glacier Barb

Adept Naga magi can weave the powers of arctic blizzards into the bows od archers. Queen Scheherezade is an adept spellcaster, and can enchant her own arrows in this way, causing them to transfer the biting cold of a Northrend storm into the target’s body.
This gives the Queen an autocast ability that functions like the Frost Arrow ability. This autocasted shot does NOT poison the enemy if you have researched Couatl Venom.
10 Gold, 1000 Lumber, 60 seconds

Parry

A good fighter can block incoming blows with ease, and the Princess is a phenomenal sword fighter. This training allows her to turn enemy weapons more easily.
Gives the Princess Evasion in melee combat (this should not be a problem as there aren’t any ranged titans), 15% at Lv1, 30% at Lv2, and 45% at Lv3. 3 Tiers.
Tier 1: 5 Gold, 500 Lumber; Tier 2: 10 Gold, 500 Lumber, Merchant; Tier 3: 20 Gold, 800 Lumber, ARC. Again, not sure on times.

Health Upgrades:
Same as normal.

Mana Vials:
Same as other Mana Vial upgrades, Tiers and all.

Merchant

Throne Room
(Looks like an Altar of Kings tinted blue-green or Depths if people are fine with it looking like the Titan shop)
In an attempt to regain her old splendor, the Queen can build a Throne Room. While not close to as grand as her old one, the Throne Room is an excellent source of knowledge and power, as the most valuable tomes and scrolls were always stored there.
Has the normal stats for an ARC. Costs 45 Gold and 2000 Lumber.

Researches:

Bladedancer Adept Training: (Tier 1)

By practicing her Bladedancer arts, the Princess gains such skill as to be able to fight many enemies at once by performing large, sweeping strikes.
This gives the Princess Round Attack, a spell that functions much like Bladestorm, except that it last for a much shorter time.
20 Gold, 1000 Lumber, 80 seconds

Bladedancer Master Training: (Tier 2)

The Princess reaches such a high level of skill that she is virtually untouchable, seeming to be there until the enemy strikes, when she suddenly vanishes, reappearing behind them.
This gives the Princess the passive Combat Double ability, which is very powerful, as well as an attack speed bonus.
45 gold, 2500 lumber, Merchant, Adept Training, 120 seconds

Seduction Arts:

Before coming to the island, Princess Llaizha was trained to be an advisor and manipulator as well as a fighter. She can use a combination of magic and beauty to draw foes towards her before cutting them to bits.
The Princess learns the spell Attract, which causes a nearby foe to go after her.
25 Gold, 500 Lumber, 90 seconds

Stormcalling:

Queen Scheherezade is, as has been said, a prodigious mage, and her specialty is in the summoning and controlling of harsh storms. She rose to power, in part, because of the common peoples’ fear in her power.
Stormcalling gives the Queen a spell that peppers an area with lightning bolts.
30 Gold, 1600 Lumber, 75 seconds

Tome of the Air:

The Queen reads of the Tome of the Air and masters its teachings. She controls the powers of storms with ease and can send someone flying just for looking at her.
The Tome of the Air gives the Queen two spells: Cyclone and Cloud.
50 Gold, 1000 Lumber, 100 seconds, Stormcalling

Deadeye:

The Queen reaches the epitome of accuracy, learning how to shoot accurately enough to hit an ant 200 yards away.
Deadeye allows the Queen to use Precision Shot, a “nuke” spell that does considerable damage.
10 Gold, 1000 Lumber, 120 seconds, all Sharpshooting upgrades

Duck and Cover:

Back in the Naga High City a klaxon would sound if there was danger. Upon hearing this noise, the citizens would shelter in bunkers, while the Larvae would dig underground.
This technology allows your Larvae to hide from enemy nuking and scouts with a special ability.
20 Gold, 1200 Lumber, 90 seconds

Dexterity:

By increasing her own dexterity, the Princess can maneuver her weapon so as to disarm or neutralize enemy weapons.
Grants the Princess the Disarm ability which, although not all titans have weapons, prevents the foes from attack for a time.
30 Gold, 1000 Lumber, 80 seconds

Endurance Training:
This is the same as normal Endurance training.

Intelligence Training:
This is the same as normal intelligence training.

Royal Armory

In the old city, the Royal Armory was a labyrinth of halls full of weapons and armour, hung to the ceiling on silver pegs. With the limited resources of the island, the Queen can construct a replica that displays but a shadow of its true self, but it will have to be enough for the duration of the Queen’s stint on the island.
Allows the Queen to build a Royal Armory.
2500 Lumber, 60 seconds

Royal Armory

(This is a maybe. It could be tinted blue-green or something)
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The Royal Armory, even on the island, is THE place to go for weapons, besides, of course, the revered Yacapo and Dildamesh. Unlike the mismatched due, however, the Armory requires no eggs, just lots of gold.
Has the same stats as an ARC and takes the same time to build.
20 Gold, 1600 Lumber, Merchant, and Royal Armory technology. Buys and sells items:

Whirlpool Blade

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These blades are empowered by ancient enchantments, causing severe confusion to the recipient of their attacks. Anyone maimed by this weapon suddenly becomes exceptionally dizzy, as though they were stuck in a whirlpool.
Anyone struck by someone holding a Whirlpool Blade loses -30% MS and gains a 25% chance to miss. Lasts for 3 seconds. Short range only. Costs 35 Gold. 5 minute cooldown.

Dragonscale Mail

Fashioned by linking hundreds of dragon scales together, these coats of mail provide excellent protection whilst leaving its bearer unhampered. It also provides excellent protection against spells.
The wearer of Dragonscale Mail gains +6armour and 50% spell resistance. Costs 35 gold and has a 4 minute cooldown.

Turtle Plate

The shell plates of mighty Dragon Turtles are fitted together to create a suit of armour able to withstand the end of the world. Its huge protection is even further improved by the way enemies are cut on the sharp edges of the Turtle Shells.
Turtle Plates give the owner +15 armour, -10% move speed, and the passive ability to return 5% of the melee combat damage dealt to it. Costs 36 gold. 4 ½ minute cooldown.

Monsoon Shield

Charged with the fury of a dozen ocean storms, this potent artifact discharges bolts of powerful lightning at nearby enemies whilst still defending its owner.
The owner gains the passive ability to shoot a single powerful bolt of lightning at a nearby enemy every few seconds, just like a held Spiny Protector or Bombard Tower. Also, the Shield gives 5 armour and, whenever the wielder is hit in close combat, the enemy striking it is purged (similar effect to the Draenei Hunter using Overload). 40 gold, 6 minute cooldown.

Lightningrod

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This item was used in the Naga Royal City to send great lightning bolts are invading enemy forces. Now, on the island, it can still be used to toast a nearby foe with a powerful shock.
This item can be used, for 120 mana, to do 800 damage to an enemy within 800 range. This ability has a 75 second cooldown. Costs 36 gold and has a 5 minute cooldown.

Maelstrom (Ultimate Tower-ish):

With enough power, Queen Scheherezade can control a Monsoon to tear around the island, ripping up trees and doing serious harm to enemies in its path.
When the Maelstrom is built, it becomes a selectable unit, though it has no, Hit Points, mana, Attack Speed, etc. It has the same build time as a normal ultimate tower, but can’t be transmuted.
The Maelstrom has no collision size and can go over any terrain. Any enemy inside its base is slowed in movement by 50% and takes 50 damage per second. The Maelstrom lasts for 30 seconds then dissipates. After being dissipated for 40 seconds, it returns to normal and can move and damage and slow enemies as normal.
Costs 90 Gold and 3000 wood, ARC, Merchant.

Units:

The Catacomb Larva:

These small, stupid beasts worked for the Naga ages ago, slaving in the catacombs beneath the Naga Royal City for the nutrients buried beneath the earth. Fortunately, they are easy to breed, and the Queen and her Princess can still use them to harvest the lumber needed for their operations on the island.
Harvester Unit
Built at the Barrio.
Harvests and moves at average speed. The Larva cannot get Harvester Survival Training, but does receive an ability that allows them to hide from the titan’s nukes.
Hit Points: 50, average
Food: 3
Normal Base Size
Upgrades: Harvester Haste Training (normal), Duck in Cover
Abilities:

Detonate (Same as normal)

Hidey Hole

Duck and cover!
Costing no mana, of course, this allows your Larvae to burrow into the ground. While underground, they are invisible (though pearl reveals them, of course), but also have complete spell immunity. Larvae cannot move, harvest, or DETONATE while hidden. Hidey Hole has a 1 second cating delay, and, when a Larvae exits the Hole, they are uprole to do anything for 1 second.Has a 30 second cooldown that commences when you unburrow your Larvae.

Princess Llaizha (Titan Hunter)

Princess Llaizha, the High Princess and daughter of the Queen, is the other Naga on the island. Her prowess with her long-hafted blade is legendary and her flirting manner only serves to make her more dangerous. If she works together with her mother, she in close combat, the other at range, then they are an undefeatable team.
Health: Probably 650 (Low for a hunter)
Health Regeneration: Normal for hunter
Movement Speed: Normal for Hunter
Range: Melee
Damage: High (110-135 Chaos)
Armour: Normal for Hunters
Attack Speed: Higher than average
Mana: Normal for Hunter
1x1 base size
6 inventory slots
Obviously, can’t harvest lumber

Princess Llaizha gains levels like a normal hunter, though she is smaller, has less life, and has high attack speed. She does NOT learn normal hunter abilities (Stat Bonus, Siphon Mana, Blink, and Avatar), but, like her mother, learns new skills through technologies.

Abilities:

Swimming (Just like some hunters and titans, the Princess has the innate ability to swim)

Parry

Requires: Parry (Lv 1, 2, 3)
As explained above, Parry is a passive ability which grants the Princess 15% evasion at Lv1, 30% evasion at lv2, and 45% evasion at lv3.

Round Attack

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Requires: Bladedancer Adept Training
This is, as has been briefly explained, a far shortened but powered up Bladestorm. When used, any enemies within 200 take 400 damage/second for 3 seconds. This is a channeling spell (she cannot move for the duration), but the Princess is immune to magic for the duration. Costs 200 mana and has a 45 second recharge

Disarm

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Requires: Dexterity
The Princess quickly counters and tosses aside the enemy’s weapon (or rips out their teeth, I don’t know), preventing the targeted enemy from attacking for 3 seconds. Although not all Titans use weapons, this spell works just as effectively on such titans for reasons too complicated to fathom. Costs 180 mana and has a 60 second recharge.

Combat Double

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Requires: Bladedancer Master Training
The Princess uses a powerful mind trick used to confuse enemies in combat. Combat Double is a passive ability making it so that whenever the Princess is hurt in close combat, she is cloned and becomes invisible for up to 5 seconds. The clone takes the Princess' place as soon as she is hurt with no delay or animation. This way, the enemy will not know when she clones (unless they know that you have the ability already). As normal, casting spells or attacking removes the invisibility, but if the Princess attacks while invisible, the attack does a bonus 45 damage. The clone can’t do damage but takes damage as normal, though it takes double from spells. Clones have no collision size. The clones will last for up to 30 seconds each.

Attract

Requires: Seduction Arts
As was shortly explained, this spell causes an individual foe to leave their current target alone and try to go after the Princess. The unit will continue to pursue (or try to pursue) the Princess until he is directed by his player to do something else. Costs 150 mana and has a 80 second cooldown.

Escape (Yes, she has an escape ability):
Undulate

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The Princess gains 100% evasion, spell immunity, and bonus speed for 2-3 seconds. 75 cooldown (This is similar to the Satyr’s Blur, but lasts maybe a second or two longer). This is exactly the same as the Queen’s Undulate.

Well, congratulations! You read through my ENTIRE suggestion. I hope you liked it, and I can’t wait to hear your advice.

Thank you SO much Jumby for teaching me how to insert images.

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